I think through out this drafting and revising process I spent a lot of time editing the body as well as the introduction. I felt like there were always things that could be changed to make it better. I wanted to make sure my thesis was strong so the reader didn’t have to question what it was. If I could go back and change some things in this essay it would definitely be the conclusion. After proof reading my essay in class I realized it needed some work. I don’t think I spent as much time on the conclusion as I would have liked to. I don’t think I related to my thesis well enough at the end, it needed to be stronger. I wish I could have added more to make it stand out. I think the way I drafted and revised this essay was very beneficial to me. I haven’t done it like this is the past. I found myself catching errors as well as flaws with my wording that I don’t think I would have caught before. Also not waiting till the last minute also really helped. I had plenty of time to work on it and didn’t find myself struggling to get it done.